還有，為什么我渴望在克蘭菲爾德大學的進一步研究四個方面的原因。首先，我疼欲望體驗，并有有在不同的專業(yè)，而不是一般的工程學院專業(yè)學習的綜合性大學的教育。其次，我迫切需要提高我的英語。這是有很大幫助的求職掌握英語，法語和我的母語中國。最后，我意識到，我對機械很感興趣，而且一般來說我在我的第一學年的一些課程，如應力分析，軸承設計和齒輪設計一個很好的報告，所以我的知識已經(jīng)掌握laies了堅實的基礎對我來說，進一步研究旋轉機械的設計。There are four reasons why I long for an further study in cranfield university. Firstly, I ache with desire to experience and have education of a comprehensive university which has professional studies in different majors rather than a general engineering school. Secondly, I need to improve my English urgently. It is of great help in job hunting mastering English, French and my mother tongue Chinese. Lastly, I realize that I have great interest in machinery, and generally speaking I have a good report at some courses in my first school year, such as stress analysis, bearing design and gear design, so the knowledge I have mastered laies a solid foundation for me to further study design of rotating machine.
I am confident I will have a good performance if your esteemed school would like to give me the entrance chance. On the one hand, my social experiences help me a lot. I have a good adaptive ability and I can merge into new environment quickly. For example, I had no idea about French as a foreigner at the very beginning, and I had never been in touch with French when I graduated from senior high school. After that I started to study french, and I entered Arts & Metiers ParisTech after three years of study. My work experiences make me deal with interpersonal relationship very well. I worked in a Chinese restaurant in the past, and I alsoworked as a trainee at Photonics Bretagne.

 On the other hand, I perform well at school. I have a good understanding in theory and I can understand the formula analysis thoroughly, moreover I like to share my opinions with members in group work, so I am competent for group work with students coming from different countries at Cranfield University. And I want to be a mechanical design engineer in motor corporation in the future, and majoring in design of rotating machine at cranfield university is of great help for the position.#p#分頁標題#e#

In conclusion, I have strong desire to further study at your esteemed univeristy. I really hope I will have the opportunity to improve my professional skills as well as overall quality, and it is a great honour for me to study and practice at the honorable school.